I've had some people read this piece, and tell me it is reminiscent of a Blue Oyster Cult song...
Kind of thin if you ask me.
Personally, I like it. It's an upbeat piece, sort of, and if you don't read it, well then maybe you are already too illiterate to appreciation anything intelligent.
The-Ridler
I thought that it was alright not something im into but it was good :)
Have a good day hunn & thanks for the post :P
~Kaila~